Iya Ythmir

Interesting prologue. It makes me want to read more of your works. “If you were mine, you would pay unspeakably for your deceit, Ecre.” It slapped the woman across the ...

The suspense in the story is wonderful but perhaps too rushed. I think there wasn't enough time for me to sympathize with the character, to get to know them more ...

I like the name Jack Russell. It's got a good vibe for me. I like to have fun with names. Sometimes, I simply type randomly on the keyboard and see ...

Yes. I always have a notebook with me. Typicall, spiral notebook. It's my pen that always gets lost (and I sometimes cry if they do) that's why I carry two ...

I would also like to know what it was that Skits did and how further the internal conflict within Reign would make her move since they're very good friends after ...

As pointed out by the previous posters, the amount of dialogue is simply too much for this one. I'd like to see more of how Gavin and Samantha interact with ...

The errors I wanted to point out have already been posted so I don't have much to say here. It's good and it has a really nice flow. I like ...

You shouldn't be too hard on yourself about it. Write what you want, just to have a gist of your characters or the setting, or the overall mood of the ...

An interesting read for a prologue. I like the description on the first part, although I was a bit confused about your first line. But this is fantasy, so my ...

This piece is interesting but it didn't keep me glued all the way. It needs more drive - or point, as the previous posters have said. The flow of it ...

Hello to all. I'm Iya and I stumbled upon this site by pure chance. I was looking for places that hold reviews for novels and books out on the market. ...